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Yo

Not bad. Really not bad. I'm just a little embarrassed because I don't know if the character is a minor, but I won't change my comment on that point.

I like:
-Very nice 3D. This is one of the first times I've seen one that's truly attractive. I'm mainly talking about the textures, the type of model, and the final rendering. (No, the glasses have nothing to do with it XD)
-The different positions are well done.
-Simple and effective story that doesn't hide anything.
-Simple and accessible gameplay.
-I really like the little management aspect.

Like Less:
-I'd just give a little minus for some belly shapes that are a bit too spherical towards the bottom and break the harmony of the 3D model.
-A little tutorial wouldn't hurt. I had to start over four times before I got the hang of it.
-Even if the story allows you to avoid wasting time, we still want to know more.

Bug:
-When you exceed a certain value, your money goes into negative territory, and everything you earn makes you lose money.

Final point:

For a first version, it's really not bad. The character used has an attractive aesthetic without being over the top. The interface and gameplay are easy to learn; it's certainly repetitive, but it's a start. Add to that the various pauses that allow you to not notice the time passing. However, a short tutorial would be nice. Overall, your project seems very well done.

I admit to being interested in the progress of your project (No, the glasses have nothing to do with it XD), which is still in its infancy. Rest assured that I will follow your work in the future, and I wish you all the best. Thank you for working on this pleasant surprise and for bringing it to our attention. Good work and see you soon. :)

Thank you for your detailed feedback. 

The main character is between 21-23 years old. I used real word values from young adult woman to do some of the calculation (belly volume) even though for the art style i used more anime/comic proportions.

Your best friend gives you a few hints at the beginning, but I’ll add a proper tutorial once I’m sure which additions will become part of the main gameplay loop.