I really liked the different ways to get further ahead, also the skip funktion, because some battles are pretty hard, i may have ha a little bit too less health. Somehow i always manage to go the right way first, even if i try to go elsewere xD Like with getting all the water away with the Bucket... Info say you removed several thing, i am kinda conflicted what expect further. Is the first chapter complete or not? I still dont really see the full story here, it seems rather unfinished for Lacys Charakter. But maybe i missed all the good story parts. Since i just returned home after clearing the Story of the Burned Lady.
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ideally there will be 4 more chapters so the feeling of "unfinished" that you are getting is intentional most likely.
"Info say you removed several things" : info from ?
My opinion on the thematic purpose of the first chapter is the following :
Lacie starts on the edge between suicide and finding a cure , of course the game ends with Lacie finding something to live for , this is shown with Sai's connection to the "to do list before you die" , essentially he proposes a modification from Suicide to Life and Lacie i think accepts this in the form of a date.