I really like the coziness I feel with this one (even if the cake ending goes wrong). Like I mentioned with a few other projects, it would be nice to implement a restart button whenever you hit an ending, since this is the kind of game that encourages choosing different paths. Music would also be welcome as well.
Something I want to suggest is maybe if could be a "bridge" between the market and the sea? Like if the market actually was selling mermaid meat! Okay, perhaps not the right vibe for this game, but some suggestion of interconnectedness would build the world further.