I really liked this. Enjoyed it all and kinda saw it all coming from the get go. Guess that's what 15 years of the muscle kink does to ya :D
I will say, I do hope this is continued. Heck i'd put money into it just to get more. Though I do gotta say this bit: When doing choices don't forget the MC is a character too. To many VNs I've played over the years forget that you've masterfully created an amazing character with the rest of npcs. I do hope our MC gets a choice to "come out on the very top" kink and story wise. Of course, that's if you play your cards right! Can't have it be easy!
Seriously, great time. I'd love to help ya out if I could <3