Overall a neat idea about combining magic, with some good influences identified. The concept statement has some good sections and is well written, but the reader is left wondering about the specifics of the magic in this game itself and what combinations will be available to the player, and how they harness their abilities. These key concepts need to be fleshed out more, and without it it is difficult for me to provide sensible feedback on the feasibility of the project in the time available. Make a point on working this out, and then consider doing a bit of the game modelling process as shown in the lectures.