Really enjoying the direction this is going so far. I did however want to mention that the writing seems to go from a smooth translation in the earlier content, into a more "machine translation" feel in the later story. Some of it comes across as awkwardly worded and is an issue that's common when translating content to English but not editing the phrasing/sentence structure to be proper English. Honestly not too hard to fix with a bit of proof reading or a fan translator to help rearrange some wording here and there. Anyways really good job so far with the story and plot setup, looking forward to future releases and seeing where it goes.