Enjoying what you have so far - I quite like the writing, though an editing pass wouldn't go amiss to catch things like "If you can ruin a relationship on accident, well on purpose.". Also, do the values of the appearance variables not allow spaces or something? The occasional "his pearly whites and sparkling blue_eyes" is a bit jarring.
Any idea when you might finish this one?
I definitely didn't see that mistake, I'll try to spell check or maybe get someone with fresh eyes to look over it before I put out the finished project. Thanks for letting me know. I actually have no idea, because sometimes I can do spaces with variables and sometimes I can't...
It's very trial and error to be honest. I want to say mid-summer if not at the end of summer, is when this one will be done because it is mostly writing, and that's one of the things I'm not half bad at :)
Thank you so much for checking it out!
