Really appreciate how much you're engaging with the feedback not just from me but from everyone commenting :)
Absolutely, man. I try to be as present as possible. If there's one thing I respect, it's when people give their time to read the story and comment on it. The vast majority of comments have been helpful, and even if some elements may have changed a bit too much with the feedback, I still appreciate the engagement.
"The compass:..."
Makes sense. I'm not entirely sure what I would have done. I'm sure I would be so out-of-it that I would not be thinking clearly.
"Sam in the Wine route:..."
Well now that very much depends on the beer! And the wine!
Ah, yes. "This game's got rapey porn in it" A disclaimer like that will work it's way into the next release for sure.
"Goats, Sheep, and You:..."
That'll do it. I don't personally see the big distinction, but what do I know.
"Writing style:..." "Not enough elegant poetry out there about animal person nutsacks, really."
Totally agree. Like it's not worthy...
No I'm going to focus on telling the story, and the writing might improve a little over time, with the exercise.
"Discord:"
Another helpful soul on here, has helped me set one up :) Check the top comment or the page description for more details.
"Timelines:"
I'm terrible at this. If I announce a date, I'll be sure to miss it. At the very least, it will haunt me. I'm the sort of guy who's always on time - neurotically so - but a project is different.