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Hello Mr/Mrs Spar0w 

Your game was recommended to me by a good friend, and I absolutely adore it! The visuals, the characters, especially the story had me completely hooked. I enjoyed the narrative you built more than I can express. From the very first encounter, the choices and their repercussions felt incredibly realistic. They made my blood boil but unfortunately, thats just the female experience, isnt it? 

The way you portrayed panic attacks was beautifully done. I could feel the tension and tightness in my chest. As someone who used to suffer from them, I found your writing and development incredibly well done. 

I can not put into words how incredible your dialogue is, so natural, hilarious, and sharp. It made me laugh and blush. The characters feel so real, like theyre their own person.

I fell in love, little by little, with the biker boy persona you created. I was smiling like an idiot as I played and replayed his scenes. Youve made an amazing game, and I know this is only the start. I truly hope you continue it, and that Ill get to see the story grow. The world you built feels so real, I love it, I felt completely enveloped by it. 

I hope you achieve everything you set out to do. 

Side note: 
Is there any chance we’ll get to see his bike? Im a huge fan of motorcycles, and Id love to see what kind he rides. 

im so sorry if there any wachy text. 

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thank you so much for your comment!! <3 with this game im trying to be as realistic as possible in the reactions, the choices etc... (even if it can never be as real as in real life of course xD) so im very happy you found the writing immersive! ill try to do better for the shift 2 and will include new scenes, new sprites, but also new branch depending on your choices in shift 1! i hope youll enjoy it just as much! <3 also i will eventually draw his bike for the next shift or in future updates so you'll be able to see what kind he rides! <3 thanks again!! <3<3