This was really cool and interesting, and then I got to the "end". I'm sad to say I've never seen a game fumble so hard in the last act. I think the "Down Rodeo" version is much better.
Side note: Americans don't say "mum". or "rubbish". or "you lot". or "go on holiday". or "simple as". Had a pretty good chuckle when those popped up, took me right out of what was otherwise a pretty atmospheric scene.