Hello! The story is so captivating already! You have a very vibrant writing style. Almost poetic. I also noted the attention to detail in portraying the emotions of both the main character and the Younger. I already love the main character for being relatable and intriguing at the same time, and that's a great thing and a sign of a strong writing, I think. And thank you for the 'flaw' choice option.
That aside, I was amazed by the audio part of this story—the sounds perfectly accentuate what's happening, creating a perfect melancholic ambient for the story. And for a first attempt, in my opinion, you coded everything excellently.
I encountered only one bug so far, in the 'but first, good morning!' choice, I think.
Good luck with the story!