First: I really like the potential!!! Okay, now on to my thoughts with one major beef and the rest being a "it would be really nice if!"
The game pauses way too much. Need to tighten that up or just don't do animations and allow frame clicks. I constantly was unsure if I could progress or not and I HATE pauses like this. Responsiveness is good and I did not feel like the game was responsive. I "ctrl'd" through a lot of text because of the pausing.
The game needs a guide/quest system. I found myself wondering where to go. I'm sure it's coming, but definitely a need as it gets more complex.
I liked the "fun" scenes. The only comment here is that the verbal intensity should match the action intensity (didn't seem to change on some, text variation and flavor variation is important for repeat scenes) and it would be nice if repeated actions resulted in "happiness" for the npc. I feel like a lot of games miss on this. In real life I like giving a few before getting my one. Overall though, I liked the direction. It reminds me of paradise lust which is one of my favorites for this style.
Oh, also on the "fun" note. I really appreciated the variations with some positions that I don't normally see for the female.
I appreciate diversity. Looks like you're trying to tap into some of that and it's appreciated. I hate games that are all blonde all the time... but... where's the cute natural red head? (as technically I guess there is a red head but clearly she's dyed)
I have concerns about the ambition as two MC's with two branching storylines might be problematic unless it was like sex and second base where it doesn't so much branch but is more "do or do not". Even so, two MC's is a lot to swallow if you're doing both at the same time. Sex and Second eventually decided to focus hard on one to 95% content completion (or about) and then switched to the other. They're still fluffing up the male story but now primarily focused on the Bree path.
This is still too early for me, but I love the potential of where it's going. I'm hoping for a sex and second base/paradise lust mixture of game. Just... please get rid of all the pausing. Please. All the other things would be cool, but I could probably live with the game as is if the pausing was fixed (and obviously with more content).