I appreciate the amount of work that goes into art so while I personally see this as something that could have been better represented in a static format like a comic, props for putting out content and making it available to people.
Most of my gripes come from not engaging with the story so I'll leave that out (not a big fan of the whole you're the girl getting it thing).
I didn't really feel like the choices really mattered or where interesting hence the comment that it would have been better served as a static story.
There really didn't seem to be that much payoff to playing it given how little connection or interest i had in the character.
Sad to say I didn't like this game, so few OC art games get made its a shame.
Maybe other will like it though. Definitely has effort put into it, has some music and sound effects that you don't see too often, and there is the hand drawn art that is nice.