Tried the game, interesting story idea, but the dialogue could be edited to flow better. The graphics are cute, but the BGM maybe starts to sound a bit annoying when you play the game for a long time. It took me some time to realize that to use the elevators you have to press the small button instead of the doors. I played until I reached the point where you have to play the card game. I lost it a couple of times and couldn't figure out what to do. Like I lost all my points and couldn't advance anymore? Also, how the turns work wasn't clear to me. Like it said 'turn 1', but I always kept losing after the first turn (was that because I accused her of cheating?). PS. In the beginning I pressed something/walked to some spot and the game ran the intro cutscene again...I think that was because of the theme of the game, but not 100% sure. At that point the theme wasn't so clear to me and I thought the game was bugged and some people might stop playing there.
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Thank you so much for the comment and all the wonderful suggestions! You can't imagine how happy I'm to see your comment because this is my first ever "real" game that I completed~ For the card game part, not sure if it's because I used the wrong word there, but yes, if you choose to question Jenny of cheating, the game will automatically ends. Based on if she actually cheated or not, you will automatically win/lose. I will make sure to add a more detailed tutorial and change the verbiage there to make it clear~ Thank you again!