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Hi! Just a tiny editorial suggestion: "She was visiting Albany alone due to her husband's frail constitution when her and your father met" should probably be, "...when she and your father met," if you want to retain that structure. (Alternatively: "...when she met your father," or "...when your father met her.")

Otherwise, this looks really compelling and I'm intrigued to see how the story develops!

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Thanks for the little editorial suggestion, and glad you enjoyed!