one thing i have to bring up, is when you pick elf and nomad as the background... it really is confusing with the childhood section. you would think something about the childs background and race would be mentioned at some point in the prologue but the supporting characters like the father and grandmother feel like they are humans. (which if youre an elf something should be there about being adopted or having an elf mother or elf culture or something). just food for thought.
Hi, thank you so much for the comment! I understand your point, since the nomadic background isn't focused on race like the aristocrat background is. That's mainly because the divide in the nomadic background isn't based on race, but on differing beliefs within the clan regarding its future, relation to forbidden magic and towards the crown. The aristocrat background is focused on race because elves hold the most power and is the most common and accepted race while humans have to fight to stay relevant, but in this case that's a struggle hugely tied to political power and influence. The MC's clan in the nomadic background has its own belief system, but it's not 'elven culture'; it's old beliefs that aren't really tied to any specific race. But it's something I could probably expand on - I'll keep your feedback in mind in case I think of some way of incorporating it in the nomadic background at a later date!