Hey there! First off, I just want to say I’m really enjoying Dawn Chorus—it’s beautifully written and the emotions really hit home for me.
I came across a small inconsistency during Devon's route, day 2. Arvo has a line that states he has drank some alcohol, but he hasn’t had anything to drink that day. I have attached an image of the line. Before, Arvo and Devon were in the sauna, so there was no drinking involved. I just want to check if this was intentional or a small error.
Thanks again for all your work on this project—I’m really looking forward to future updates!