Just Finished playing this, and I have to say, It hits kind of hard. The 2 separate endings are quite unique, and I feel bad for the characters.
Only unintended glitch happened in the 2nd playthrough of the 2nd run, where putting the sandwiches together correctly got bugged,saying the correct orders were missing ingredients. This is easily fixed by closing the game and reopening it to the start of the 2nd run.
You made a nice visual novel.