There are some really cool ideas in this. I love how the piece grows more and more dissonant and distorted as it progresses, almost as though all the elements are coalescing into the one amalgamation in the mix. The melodies present throughout are interesting and pretty varied, even down to their voicings. Overall this track is pretty unique, and I feel like therein lies its strength. It wouldn't work if it were just inserted into several games, but it would work incredibly well with the correct game -if that makes sense?
All in all, an interesting listen, and rather unique as I've mentioned. Patches used throughout are wonderfully gritty, and I dig how the genre doesn't seem to be nailed down to any one particular convention. Good work, and best of luck!