just played, i can't say some of the dialogs were "natural" but it don't really sounded "weird" to me. Just to "suddlen". like the story just starts and "POW, SPEED". In general, really liked the flashbacks and dream sequences. Will definetly come back, got me curious with the worldbuilding and the backstories.
I left everything as a DEMO for now because some dialogues and choices changed! Also, I know the pacing seems too fast, but it will slow down as soon as the next update goes out! I chose to tell Bram's story from it's middle—actually, more like the 2/4th of it—, so there's a lot to uncover about his past, while he still has to do with his present, and balancing exposure to both will be challenge. All I can do is keep trying to get better at writing and hope that I'm doing a good job :)
That said, thank you for reading the DEMO to RUN!