the color scheme really adds to this as an "objet d'art." also really appreciated the rhyming couplet at the end. actually, the rhyming in general elevated the piece. claps all around
Thank you! The form is a spenserian sonnet, so the rhyme scheme is a little odd. ABAB BCBC CDCD EE. But I love it! It's a tasty challenge trying to write a sonnet with that particular rhyming scheme, and it makes my brain happy 😁