Well, that’s already a fine piece of art! Played the PC-Version. I espacially like the mind control theme and did read some stories in this context. The characters are well layed out, i like Anna very much, and Rosie though not the most pretty of the lot is a nice neighbourhood girl, very fitting.
Suggestion: I would like a scenario where Richard uses something like: “…from this time on, whenever i snap my fingers, your arousal rises…” That leaves the scale of exitement open, without a new control intervention.
I am missing a bit the final most excited reactions/expressions of the participants, perhaps that is planned for later stages in the game?
The software in it’s current state is already very stable, i did not notice any crash or failure, everything works well.
There are some small errors in the texts, on some parts ‘her’ and ‘his’ got mixed up. Perhaps a translation error?