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I really, really, REALLY enjoyed this demo! You truly have a knack for creating diverse, interesting characters and ESPECIALLY memorable moments such as funny scenes - the coin store guy is classic, the dummy scene, and broken armour skit. The dramatic scenes are well done - nice use of music and pacing. I'm really invested in all 3 main character's different story arcs and curious how they are all linked together. Love your concept of a universe with 7 differing realms, and love how they are referenced by even NPCs. Really helps bring the world to life. I hope to see Archie's realm in the finished product. He and Lily are my favourite characters. I like the tension between her and her sister. 

This is obviously a WIP but I found I could walk on the walls of the train (I almost thought this was intentional so it took me longer to work out what to do XD). Also, in some scenes, especially with tension between the two sisters, the music was the standard 'uplifting shop' music and I felt it needed to be more dramatic to fit the mood of the scene. When given tasks, I would have liked readable lists - I'm kinda forgetful XD

Please finish this!! Happy to test your game in future. 

Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm really looking forward to bringing these 7 realms to life throughout this game. Archie's realm is definitely going to be a fun one to show. Also super happy to see Lily as one of your favorites. I've been putting a lot of thought into her story arc and character development.

Yikes the walls in the wall with no collision was definitely not intentional. Thank you for pointing that out along with the uplifting music playing in the tense parts. 

Good point with the list of current tasks. I'm pretty sure I saw a plugin that could do that (most likely Yanfly's).