Just played through v0.2, 4 small writing notes for ya; sure doesn't have an h in it. Capitalize your I's, there is a scene with Beryl where you spell interesting with 2 S's, and there's a few times you spelled learn as lear. That's all I spotted on my quick "playthrough". Overall feels very fast paced, but I'm looking forward to seeing if this goes anywhere. Keep it up!