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Again I could not fit everything into 24 thousand characters. Sorry, I will cut off half of what I wanted to say again.

Hi.

First of all, thank you for answering and taking my suggestions into consideration I hope this will help improve the game. Secondly, I want to respond to everything you gave in the answers, because I think we had a small misunderstanding. It seems to me that your game is very intuitive. And players will most likely have no problem understanding how they will know what is possible and what is not and why.(Because you already have 3 pretty clear options in the game to understand all this) The example you gave (with entering the son's room) was clear to me from the point of view of the game, but a slight misunderstanding was caused by the fact that the dialogue was exactly the same as in the daytime. There was not even a simple line that would distinguish them from each other. Example: Mom, why did you come into my room at night. Regarding the 3 things that make your game very clear. I think you do not need to add any additional mechanics to make everything clear to everyone, you have everything very clear anyway. So I ask, instead of making some new game element responsible for this. Instead, implement what you have already used in your game in all the places where it is missing. Examples below: 1 These are different dialogues - you do not need to completely rewrite the dialogues and all that stuff, a small detail is enough to make this action different from another. You already have this in the game - when you cook food for your son for breakfast - the dialogue says that it is breakfast and the dish is pancakes, and when you cook dinner - instead of breakfast, dinner is written and the dish is spaghetti. This small detail gives an understanding that these are different actions.

2 Mechanics of increasing corruption level I will be honest, I am not happy with the corruption system. I do not understand why it is in %. I ask you to change the corruption system from % to any abstract numbers (for example, just 70% to 70 pc (any other name or even without a name). What could get rid of the misunderstanding, is if points were given for this action In my understanding it should have been like this: a certain amount of % is given for simply showing up naked in front of your son (for example 5), a certain amount of % is given for showing up naked with a piercing (for example 2), a certain amount of % is given for showing up naked with a tattoo (for example 2), and for example naked with a tattoo and piercing( 1 more). And you can get more points if you come in at night (for example, 2 more). But they cannot be obtained in any other way.

3 You have these mechanics, i(I will give examples from the game): 1. clean up your son's room - here a simple mechanic is implemented, which is quite clear to me as a player - if I can do something I have a button, if I ca not I do not have a button. The mechanics are simple, clear, I did not even think about it until I met another mechanics. Example 2, when you buy a vibrator in a store - if you have not bought it, there is no option button with a vibrator in the masturbation section, if you have bought it, the button appears. Example 3, when you buy body paint in art supplies, if you bought it, you can go to Stevie and a choice will appear where he can paint, if not bought, the button will not appear.

Mechanics 2 (as for me it is more understandable, and I like it more) – examples Example 1. With the masturbation menu, from almost the very beginning there is a sign you need 15% corruption to do this action, this button hangs constantly until the action is opened. Example 2, boss - if you stay for extra work time 3 times, the boss will offer to suck for $ 20, if the corruption level has not reached 15%, the button you need 15% will be present constantly and the same with the sex button and 35% corruption level. Example 3. What's new is when for any action on the beach they ask for 50% and 55% corruption level. I think that this is very clear, and it is necessary that each choice be implemented according to this scheme. The only thing that needs to be improved in this mechanics is that not only the corruption level % is displayed, but also, for example, the clothes necessary for this action.

In version 2.0 you implemented these 2 mechanics at the same time- 

In version 2.0 you implemented these 2 mechanics at the same time, but before that, in exactly the same situation (from the moment the game started) and always like that, exactly 2 mechanics were implemented, but this time, for some reason 1, as for me, the problem is not in the mechanics themselves, but in the fact that there is no sequence, for example: From the very beginning of the game I see the gym, I can click on the gym and get a message that you can only enter the gym in sportswear (which is not logical, because in theory you can enter in regular clothes and change in the gym, and in general you do not need sportswear to register, but that is not so important now) that's all, from day 1, after which, when I buy sportswear, I have to change at home and go to the gym. This is all an example of just when the game explains to the player what needs to be done to get (simple and clear, like showing the corruption level). But in update 2.0, the beach location was added (I like the location itself, I'm very glad that it was added although I think it needs some work, but it is not that important) and after adding this location, a problem arose, how would a player who had not read the update and did not have a bikini suit know that there was such a location, since the location marker appears after purchasing a bikini, and during the storyline, the bikini is never mentioned (although also, why does the entrance to the beach cost $10 and I can not enter in regular clothes and change on the beach, well, I will write about that separately, because the location itself caused me a lot of contradictions). So, the question is simple, why could not they add an entrance to the beach location, like an entrance to a gym, where you know from the very beginning what you need to get in? I wish there was not such a thing. Therefore, I would like to ask you to implement the second mechanic wherever possible. After all, the game should be understandable not only to those who already play it and have saves, but also to a new audience.

The bugs or problems that I found after another playthrough, I will also describe the misunderstandings, and at the end I will make my suggestions: 

The first problem, since version 1.7.1, and along with it my first misunderstanding (whether it was intended or not) Misunderstanding: You can start livestream without registration on onlyfap and even without mobile phone, i think that it should work like this you buy phone you register you can stream, or give opportunity to register from son`s computer. 

Problem or even bug: After life stream you can not have any kind of sex with Mark in son`s room(Mark always tells you that he saw you on the livestream, after which the only option in dialogues with his son and friend is to leave the room). 

Problem 2: If you start watching TV to pass the time at night, You will receive energy, and the day will not end, this is how I received from 1 energy to 15. 

Problem 3: After a certain amount of energy(13) I did not lose energy when I masturbated, livestream.

Problem 4: If you start livestream at night, you can stream it an unlimited number of times. The only thing that helped fix these problems was to fall asleep Problem 5: You can not enter your son's room naked when your friend is in the room, but if you go into the bathroom (if there is a scene where your son is peeping at you), then after that you can enter the room naked, although according to the logic of the game, your son's friend should be there.

Misunderstanding or maybe problem: You can not enter your son's room in clothes at night, but you can start a broadcast from his room, and he will be present at this broadcast (it is not logical, because before, when you press the room button, and not the computer button, you could not enter the room) 

Misunderstanding or maybe problem: To enter the hall I have to change clothes in advance, then walk down the street and enter the hall, at the same time for a new location (Beach) I do not have to do anything, I pay the entrance and immediately enter in a bikini (this is not a problem), but after that I return home in a bikini, that is, according to the logic of the game, I walked in a bikini along the street from the beach to the house, but if I try to leave the house in a bikini, they will not let me go out, I have to change back to normal clothes. Why is that? 

Misunderstanding or maybe problem: if I enter the store in the section Art supplies I have the option to buy a body pain there is no back button, and even after purchasing this option remains, it does not disappear and in order to exit, I constantly need to buy it, there is no other way to exit. 

Problem 6: Scene with Marc on bitch do not work from 55% corruption, i got 55% and it shows i need 55%, then when i make it 58% it started working. Problem 7: After the scene on the beach with Mark, the Mark icon does not disappear, but when I click it says empty. This problem also happens during the day (there is an icon, but Mark writes empty). 

Misunderstanding or maybe problem: When you watch TV with your son, there is an option with a scene in lingerie, to get this scene, you need to watch a movie with your son in the evening in clothes(normal, pijama,) you can not start the underwear scene (why? why do i have to go back and change into normal clothes to be able to undress into the clothes i have). Also problem: after watching you will be left in your lingerie(why?). 

Misunderstanding or maybe problem: You can meet Mark on the beach on day 3, he will act as if he knows you, although in theory we should meet him on day 6. There was another mistake, but while I was describing others, I missed it. 

After replaying: 

Problem: You can watch a movie with cum on your face with your son, but you can not cook in the kitchen under the same conditions, or even enter the kitchen. 

Problem: You can broadcast with cum on your face with your son, but you can not enter his room under the same conditions, you wipe it off your face 

Game suggestions section from insignificant (not affecting the plot, to those that can change the plot, I will try not to describe them too much, if any of them interests you and you agree to implement them in the game, write, I will describe in more detail): 

1. Of course the first thing I want to change is the corruption system. 2. Secondly, please make a really good interesting economy, and not like in 1.7.1 (the normal passage, without sex with the boss and other characters, should be hard, difficult, with a bunch of problems, etc., and the passage through sex should be easier, richer, etc.) 3. Normal calendar!!!! Make the mobile a little more important part of the game In the phone: 1. Add a phone book to your mobile phone, at first it will just display all available game characters, and in future versions of the phone book you can, for example, invite someone from the contact book to your home for sex or other events, etc. 2. Please indicate the number of available images in your phone 3. After purchasing a mobile phone, the ability to shoot scenes (which we see in the game, there are 50 of them), this will give us the opportunity to re-watch scenes without going through the plot again, and will give us the opportunity to re-watch inaccessible scenes. 4. To the point above. Display the number of videos in the gallery. 5. Possibility to upload these scenes to onlyfap and get money for them (price for 1 video is $2 per day) 6. Ability to take photos at work, objects, landscapes, etc. (with the ability to publish on onlyfap or another application, but without payment) 7. Introduce a weekly payment for a mobile phone (after buying a mobile phone for yourself, +$10, initially pay only for your son's mobile phone) 8. Payment for TV per month, and computer ($10 each) 9. The possibility of starting an onlyfap with Anna, or filming videos with Mark, or for example with the boss (it would be great to do it in the form of a hidden camera, for example for blackmail or just so you don't get fired), the same with your son 10. Hire your son and Stewie as operators for your onlyfap (the ability to film from the side, at school on the beach, for example, or somewhere else) 11. Photos with sex toys 12. Scenes for onlyfap with strapon and Anna, strapon and son, Anna with strapon and son, and other femdom scenes. 13. Online store (this will give an opportunity for a new character - delivery man) 14. Invitations to film porn, through the onlyfap app (this can already give the opportunity to develop as a porn actress) 15. Also a toy tester (on camera, for pay) In the home: 1. More sex toys to interact with on your bed. 2. The ability to masturbate in the bathroom, on a chair, on a sofa in the kitchen, on the kitchen table and even in your son's room (depending on the corruption levels, for example on a chair from 10+ in the kitchen from 20, and in your son's room from 30, and if all this happens in the presence of your son, then a multiplier of 2 (60 on your son's bed in front of your son), and of course the ability to film these scenes) 3. The ability to walk in different rooms, in different clothes, at different levels of corruption (5, for example, to wear a bikini in the kitchen, and to wear a bikini on the street, then 70, and in my son’s room, when a friend is there, then 35, and at work, for example, 105), etc. School: 1. In the school toilet, glory hole stalls 2. New character - school principal (various interactions such as sex so that the son is not expelled from school, hiring as a sexology teacher, hiring as a cook, etc.) 3. Gangbang scene with students on school desk 4. Extra lessons with Anna (at school) - sex scene 5. Lifestyle teacher with Stewie 6. Pose for a show (and then have the opportunity to walk around the school naked, at a certain level of coup, and at a higher level, naked on the street) Beach: 1. Change the beach (less water by 2 times, instead add a volleyball court (in the future it will be possible to arrange, for example, a gangbang with Mark and his friends there) 2. The opportunity to enter the beach for free, but to lie down or order something - you have to pay money 3. Changing rooms on the beach 4. Nudist beach 5. Yacht (later it can be developed that you can either work there or, if you are rich or a porn actress, then go to a party).

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If you agree with any point, then write so that I can describe it in more detail

Thank you for working on the such amazing game. I never thought that such small game could give a lot of emotions.