That render don'ts look like at train station at all, if you hasn't changed much of the story the city we going is a big city, a train station in big cities have modern style, that one looks like a building from 1940 japan style. it looks like the inside of library or a orphanage, i think this render would be more suitable and awesome for a flashback scene, maybe a scene when the mc goes on the orphanage mission with the child molester priest. Or maybe one for flashback scene with the mc and his parents (or his grampa).
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I should have been more specific, it's a train station mall. And yes, it does have an old-fashioned design, but that's intentional. As I mentioned in one of my posts, the world of Lycoris Radiata will no longer be set in the real world but in a unique alternative version of it.
There are other reasons for this choice, but those would be spoilers.
Oh, and to my knowledge, there are train station malls over a century old inside big cities, such as New York grand central terminal