Just finished this last night, and honestly REALLY enjoying what's here, you hit a lot of kinks that I wasn't expecting going in, but REALLY nail the execution with for my tastes.
Can't stress enough how much I hope to see more of it. Mostly because I'm down incredibly bad for Alton and desperately want to see him bad-ended in all of the juicy ways the setting is implying, especially with how Part 1 concludes. Interested in the more positive endings as well, of course, but I have my tastes :P