I’m making a demo for a game, and need to get to work finalizing the demo’s script. It’s a comedic, story-driven 2D platformer.
The script is pretty big (130 pages, a lot of it is just NPC interactions), and I’d like for someone to look over a new revision of it and give me feedback (particularly this time on the comedy). The game is also pretty weird.
Are you any good at comedy? Do you think you'd be able to refine the jokes?