Thank you!! I'm glad it resonated with you so much!
The whole "pseudo-hypnotic/primal" effect that Caine experiences during the scene is a bit personal for me, so it's great to hear that other's experience similar feelings.
Chapter 2 is currently in the works! No telling if it will pan-out exactly. But I have plenty more ideas on how to make this 'yote even smellier. ;3