Loved it. Thanks for sharing this story with us. It'll probably be a long time before I come back to it to replay, but I do still look forward to the finished revamped version. Still feels like there's a lot to go, not because you haven't made progress, but because the last remaining chapter(s) is pretty big. Though I am curious what you'll wind up changing as you refine the script for the revamp.
I love how it unfolds so slowly and carefully. Any other VN like this would be way shorter and feel rushed, but for the most part, at least with the revamp, everything felt paced really well. Anyway, again, thanks for the great story. Ciao.