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Loved it. Thanks for sharing this story with us. It'll probably be a long time before I come back to it to replay, but I do still look forward to the finished revamped version. Still feels like there's a lot to go, not because you haven't made progress, but because the last remaining chapter(s) is pretty big. Though I am curious what you'll wind up changing as you refine the script for the revamp.

I love how it unfolds so slowly and carefully. Any other VN like this would be way shorter and feel rushed, but for the most part, at least with the revamp, everything felt paced really well. Anyway, again, thanks for the great story. Ciao.

there really is a lot left to go. ton of things that happen that continue to really impact the story. in my head, the park was the halfway point but once i started writing stuff, i think the last 3 chapters are probably 50% of the game. originally, i expected to move quickly through the later parts of the game but now i'm not sure. this v15 update was harder than anything i've done before so i'm not sure. seriously appreciate you reading and dont worry about the re-read if you never get around to it. i'm not much one for re-reads myself-- especially how friggen long this story is. but, i do hope i'm able to pull something off in the revamp for the ending. thank you so much for reading and thanks for letting me know what you thought :)