This is a very cool game with a custom system and a slick layout. The graphic design is immediately appealing and really draws you in. The game system seems fun and dynamic. It really seems like it would emulate a kind of survival horror game on a dangerous planet.
I do think the layout of the rules could be tweaked slightly. I almost feel like the left most column of both pages should be swapped. I felt like I was getting a deep description of how rules play out without even knowing that they existed and and why I was doing them. I would also think about moving the table setting and description on the first page out from being tucked up against the graphic and into the first column. I didn't even see it until I had finished reading the first column and felt a little lost as to what was happening.
Over all, I think this is a very well designed game. I like it a lot. Any complaints I have are very minor formatting tweaks. Basically the last little bit of cleanup before the game is totally finished.