A lot of the rhythms here are wonky, I recommend you quantize your music, the mixing is not the best which does not work well with these ambitious arrangements. I found the glockenspiel in the Overture to be especially loud but there are these kinds of issues throughout.
The music you've made is rather unique. The aesthetic is pretty orchestral but the way the ideas come in feel more like a rap beat where a fragment is introduced and then looped. It's outside of classical norm but it's a unique aesthetic that you could play into.