Hey Mxie,
thank you for taking the time to write out such a detailed message.
As long as people are respectful in their phrasing we welcome both positive and negative feedback. However I hope you also understand that due to criticism being very subjective in nature it is impossible for us to take everything into account that we hear. You are valid in disliking the parts you mentioned about the writing, but we've funnily also received many people mentioning these exact points being a reason they enjoyed the game so much.
Nonetheless I will send this criticism along to our writer staff, but I ask you to understand that they have the decision in how to shape their work. Since this is a volunteer project it is important to me to leave freedom to our staff to express themselves in a way that they're the most motivated about. It is their choice which criticism they will take into account and which not, I will not influence that.
Our game isn't perfect and that's okay, you are free to dislike it and do not need to feel bad about it. I do hope you find other projects/ games that are more to your taste! Though I do appreciate you mentioning the positives as well, thank you!