Looks great so far, really excited for it!
Some feedback to consider:
- As some pointed out, the translation might need some work. Saw a few she/her that were out of place and inconsistent, even in the opening scene.
- On a phone (eg. Pixel 5 Pro), some of the text and buttons are quite small and difficult to read, even with good eyesight. It feels as though it was designed for desktop and then just shrunk down for mobile. Maybe some DPI adjustments?
- I chose a character name but it reverted back to Achilles. Limitation of the demo?
Otherwise, the artwork and design are amazing, and I'm looking forward to digging into the gameplay!