probably a weird thing to comment on but i really liked how design theory played into this - the buttons diving deeper into the memories being visually much smaller than those which ending the thought early, luring the eye to forget. also reinforced by the many opportunities you're given to back out, feels like the main character is fighting those memories away. i loved the use of contrast echoed in the characters themselves and the settings of the beach and the nightclubs. also the one description of the kiss tasting "stale" stood out to me. highly recommend reading with sounds of crashing ocean waves in another tab :~)
Not weird at all, in my opinion, I'm actually super pleased that's what you liked and appreciate you taking the time to let me know. It was one of the first things I thought of when I was thinking about how to shape and write this. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
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Sweet and bitter melancholy. I really liked the imagery of the sun, the pinks, the sand, the oranges. Very vivid.
Ahhh, thank you! Niq did an amazing job shaping the aesthetic. And thank you for playing!
probably a weird thing to comment on but i really liked how design theory played into this - the buttons diving deeper into the memories being visually much smaller than those which ending the thought early, luring the eye to forget. also reinforced by the many opportunities you're given to back out, feels like the main character is fighting those memories away. i loved the use of contrast echoed in the characters themselves and the settings of the beach and the nightclubs. also the one description of the kiss tasting "stale" stood out to me. highly recommend reading with sounds of crashing ocean waves in another tab :~)
Not weird at all, in my opinion, I'm actually super pleased that's what you liked and appreciate you taking the time to let me know. It was one of the first things I thought of when I was thinking about how to shape and write this. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.