I’m the master of yap I’ll give you some tips
1. Divide it into paragraphs
Fast paced mixes and regen gear should be in different paragraphs instead of a wall of text this makes it easier to manage and look at without feeling overwhelmed
2. Mention general stuff (the three stats) first and then mention more niche things like party torso, and other bows this helps the new guy find what he needs earlier without having to look for 20 minutes for his general scenario
3. Just structure stuff better
It feels random and sporadic what ur saying and it just feels like random disassociative thoughts with no thought put behind structure or what goes where. Before posting something think ably whether you or other people would actually want to read it when first looking and reading like 3 lines. Take my Alienware crash out for example
Instead of just having a 1000 word wall of text, I structured it like this
Disclaimer/important info
Stuff abt the systems
Processor(priority)
Airflow (still very important)
Dell (Less important then mentioned before)
Customizable (some people don’t care)
Fighting other arguments (least important)
This was included more to just further my argument and most ppl don’t care about this which is why it was at the bottom
4. Use more than just paragraph (sometimes)
In this situation, yea paragraphs would usually be fine, but as I did before, a numbered list or bullet style list would also work depending on the situation.
TL;DR
Divide to paragraphs
Mention general info, specific info, niche info, mostly unimportant info in that order
Improve structure
Don’t use just a wall of text