The principal used the wrong name when you first meet and the mc calls Celeste their name when they return from the bar after meeting Jack.
There's also a bit too much screen time for the unimportant male characters like Kevin and this Jack guy you meet at the bar. First impressions are important and starting off with the dudes at the station isn't great imo for this type of game.
Also not really getting why the mc was so torn up over the first scene with Mia. If you want it to seem like they lost control and went too far you need to show that in the moment. They didn't do anything that felt like it truly justified their reaction.
I like the game so far generally but there's little things like that that put me off a bit.