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1. Why did you decide to give the characters Asian names? It could be a good game about the Roman Republic. The setting looks like that, and the characters look rather European. The slave girl could be from one of the Germanic, Scythian, or Proto-Slavic tribes. Maybe even the daughter of a chieftain or a renowned berserker and that is why she's so muscular.  And she's depressed because her tribe and family members were either enslaved or killed. The son could gradually teach her his language, and she could tell him about her homeland. Also, it can explain the disdain he feels towards her. Let's assume that his elder brother was a Roman soldier and was killed by the barbarians during one of the campaigns.

2. Would you consider making her hair customizable? Blue hair is not natural, and it ruins the immersion. It'd also be cool if the names were customizable.

3. Many similar games jump to sex too quickly, making them dull and unmemorable because they are unrealistic. There's a great potential in this game. You can make it more psychological and, thus, more interesting. Introduce sex scenes gradually, mixing them with the plot and character development. Also, please, make her smart and resourceful. Not just another sex doll.

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Your comments are very valuable, thank you.

I know that the place is more European, but in the world of anime I gave Japanese names for that, besides I like the Japanese sound meaning, but I can consider changing it if it is not liked.

The thing about hair is that in the future there will be more women and I want each of them to have a different color, to distinguish them easier, I know it is not realistic, but such games are not realistic, my also wont be,  I have planned a slightly twisted sick story with strong xxx extensive scenes,  I havent seen in any FMG game, and character development.

You are right about being careful not to make her a sex doll, I will be careful.

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personally i liker her hair. so i hope it doesnt change.


what i do hope for, is the option to make the main character name custom.