And here is the translation corrected and amended by Samuel Ziterman and Lia Roques!
After a last reading and a few corrections, I think this French version is understandable without distorting your text :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gPS7Q2nUiBZsFksXGMJOOLYM3h2He_wpyj90_-vdptY/...