And here is the translation corrected and amended by Samuel Ziterman and Lia Roques!
After a last reading and a few corrections, I think this French version is understandable without distorting your text :)
I formatted it and added it to the itch.io page, it's delightful as a creator that someone would go out of their way to translate my work into another language. Thank you for putting so much effort into it!
With pleasure! And thank you for the layout :)