Absolutely, and I don't think it'd take priority from either of us heh. If you happen to have an easy way to just read through the script/all lines (I don't mind digging through source in the worst case scenario) I can make a list of edits, changes and reasoning for your consideration in pretty short order :3
Assuming you're fine with this and wouldn't mind the help, I think I could locate you in the RP Telegram link I've found, just lemme know with a reply here yes or no and I'll hop in and give a boop!
Sure. I can give you access to the manuscript which I use to create the game.
My artistic voice has been very strained lately and I am on hiatus, but I don't mind aiding folks in enjoying my work. This one was a little rougher around the edges because I stopped paying for grammarly and didn't go back and edit like I should have.
I can understand the strain; outside from anything personal you may be going through (I'm terribly sorry for your loss), the world is in a, frankly, depressing state. And it definitely wasn't bad by any means, I'd hardly call it rough in the slightest, silly bean.
Take the greatest of care out there~