Once I started reading, I couldn't stop. Not 'till it was over. This was phenomenal. Like, I had to turn on the lights midway through reading because the sun was setting, and there was no way I was reading this in the dark.
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As someone with a hypno kink, this went from slightly hot to absofuckinglutely horrifying so, so fast. Also, just an excellent use of the Ren'Py engine as a narrative/framing device. There were a few moments when I was afraid to click, because I just KNEW what was going to happen, but I JUST COULDN'T STOP.