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hey there are some typos in the desc of your post ( you wrote two times "just" ) and your game crashes very early on (im too scared to retry and go further in the game tbh), it seems also that the sprite glitches sometimes and turns into a flower ? all of this happens like right off the start, after a few dialogue option it starts bugging ( right after saying jokingly that the girl is a philosopher )

Despite all of that, it looks like an interesting game, i like the ambiance and the dialogue is pleasant to read, the drawing is pretty great but it might be better if you make the sprite bigger because there's a lot of empty space. Also use more punctuation it would make the dialogue more natural 

Hopefully you'll fix the bugs with a few playtest ! keep working hard and this game will definetly be very great,i see a lot of potential in it ! just watch out for those bugs cuz i cant finish the demo lol 

i'm looking forward to play the demo if there's a patchnote tho

Aw man im lowkey dissapointed that there are so many bugs... , however thank you very much for constructive feedback! I will fix the bugs as soon as possible, and thanks for actually testing this game

Hello! It's been a while, but I think I've managed to fix all the bugs that ruined the whole gameplay.

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all of the bugs are gone wow idk how you pulled that off but i did a whole playthrough with no issues thank you for fixing it ! 

now that i did my first ending i can say that your game is surprisingly deep i really didnt expect that lol, but it leaves me craving for more !! your writing is really profound in a way, it's refreshing because it doesnt try to be too much it really feels like a convo with a ( kind of depressed ) friend, i can only hope that you will do a game fully fledged because it seems that you have a lot to tell and a longer game would really help you to convey your philosophy ( if its not too extreme to call it that ). But of course, for now, this game is really a nice appetizer 

count on me to play the other versions and your future games ! your work is really impressive for a first game so keep it up ! ( btw sorry for the bad english its not my native language )