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You know, I feel like it's not often that a visual novel makes me genuinely nervous, but I really was during the first couple of loops with the way Yasha is hounding MC and at least remembers some degree of what happened. I could really feel the pressure after trying to enact the soup plan the first time and technically failing. I feel like the balance of some of the paths can be a bit finicky, since I got bounced between endings 4 and 2 for a little while, but I managed to figure it out.

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You know, when Sage first brought up the tethering, I was kind of worried that it might lead to some sort of role reversal where he becomes the crazy one using the string, but honestly Sage seems too level-headed for that since he's accustomed to both immortality and time loops.

As an aside, I'd feel more sorry for Yasha if he weren't so chill with killing MC for not being exactly what he wants sometimes, but that is also something that made me more wary of him and interested to see all of the endings. I did find his reaction in Ending 12 to be funny, though, since it's one of the few ones where one of the guys is like "Shit... Guess I have to start again." I kind of think On the Run can have sort of a sub-ending, if you managed to get Yasha to drink the soup, since I'm not sure if there's real need to run once he's forgotten. Then again, we're not really in a position to check, but I think we might figure it out when Yasha doesn't follow so desperately. It's kind of interesting that the ending where he can be renamed follows through on the next loop.

Thank you so much for playing!! ❤️💖

Oh no!! Yes it's a little too easy to get 2 and 4... 🥲 2 was originally the hardest ending to get, but I felt that it displayed one of the more interesting ending paths, so I tweaked things a little... and perhaps made it a little too easy to get now. 💀 I'm glad you were able to escape and enjoy some of the other endings!!! 🙌 and I hope you weren't too scared after you got used to it!


OMG though!!! You bring up a great point about Ending 8!! There should be no reason to run after we fed Yasha the potion. 🤔 I should add a variation (8A/8B) and/or add it in as Ending 13! LOL. I'll make sure to add it into the next update! 🫡

if the player does decide to get on the train, what would you like to see them doing in the 8B (fed potion but got on train) ending?? LOL


It would be funny if Sage turned into the Yandere after you tethered to him...! Whew but I feel like that would be too scary LOL. Sage is a little island of healing in our crazy game... ✨️ though my personal favorite is still Yasha.


Thank you so much for playing again and leaving your thoughts!! ❤️💓 it seriously helps with story development/revisions!

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Aw, no worries! I wasn't too scared of things and it was interesting to have a situation that could be a bit more difficult to predict.

As far as what a "train with soup" situation would be like, I'd probably wonder if Sage realized that we did it and tried to cut the string. Looking in to what happened to Yasha to make sure things are safe now seems like a general possibility. I almost sort of wonder if running away instead of accepting him or hiding behind Sage might put enough fight in Yasha that he doesn't forget things as severely. Potentially, Yasha could know just enough to follow the string and see his soulmate, but be kind of normal about the whole thing. lol

Yeah, though, I agree that Sage staying level-headed is definitely good. I had that concern fairly early on in the loops, so I think I was just worried on how things could backfire- kind of like how we can ask Sage about "what if Yasha doesn't drink the soup" even if we can always manage it if we're being sneaky.

Funnily enough, in the loops, I don't think I ever got Yasha's 1850 line, so I was always a bit confused by that reference until I saw a let's play where someone did get it.

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Ooh! I thought of another possibility. If Seto does manage to cut the string in that version of On the Run, maybe it does backfire on us for once! Depends on what you think would be better.

Oooohhhhh I love all of these ideas!!!! 🤩🤩🤩🔥🔥🔥

Hmmmmmmm oooh that's so fun re: Yasha following the string... he finds you with memory loss and is just a changed man/finally an actually sweet man because he no longer has the mental burden of thousands of years worth of memories....! 

Or the protag and Sage meet up and check in on Yasha and see that he's living a normal, boring life....


Someone misread "living in Squalor" as "living in Equador" in a stream and I thought that was hilarious, so maybe you move to another country and Sage comes to visit (and romance you? Cough) LOL


Thank you so much for the inspiration!!! I'll see if I can come up with something in the upcoming small updates! 🙌✨️💖

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No prob! I'm very excited that there could be a little more. c: