You made a lot of mistakes, bro.
1- The camera perspective is too far away, everyone wants to see it up close.
2- In most scenes we have to look from the 1st point of view. I will not give an example or my comment will not be published.
3- You need to improve most of the scenes, it is not satisfying at all, bro.
4- You should make the characters look more magnificent and make their parts bigger.