I liked the story! I think the presentation could use some work (such as where area transitions are, even if they are always the edge of the map) and some of the puzzle items are tricky to find. Thanks for telling your tale though!
I'm glad you liked the story! It was our first game ever so alot of our time was spent figuring out the basics. We definitely learned a ton and can't wait to make our next one. Thank you so much for the feedback!