Played for a few tries and eventually got a score of 23. I hold this is not too bad. The idea of the game is pretty nice, trying to perfectly make pancakes according to the orders. I found it quite fun and enjoyed it quite a lot. The hand-drawn graphics are cute, and I really like the gameover screen with the arrest note. Custom screens like these are always a good sign of polish and deserve praise!
For a bit of criticism, I'd say the game doesn't progress in terms of difficulty, and once you've got into a rhythm of the orders, it's actually quite hard to lose. It would be way nicer if the game started to add ingredients the further you go. I'll also comment on the fact that the game is kind enough to give you infinite time when reading the order, which I think can be changed to a set amount in order to increase difficulty.
Anyway, this is an interesting entry and I do see potential in the game idea! Keep up the good work!