Man, this was so heart breaking to read. The psychological trauma and scars this will leave is just terrible on both children the fact that both became victims from the actions of their parents is hard to stomach. I'm interested to see how much Nolan will learn as he gets older to understand that despite his intentions being good, it may in turn make our life even harder in the end. I would hope that, as the Mc gets older they will learn to understand that the problem lies not with our brother, but parents. Although rationality may not be what we hang on to when it comes to coping in the end, just from reading it became clear to me that understanding the reality of your situation doesn't remove the pain and anger you will feel and that feeling has a right to be validate as well, just instead directed at the shitty ass parents instead of our brother who is also a victim. A moment between twin that should have brought them closer instead tore them apart even further, just by the actions of our egg donor. But I digress..... beautifully written story! I ended tearing up throughout it all in the end. The way i just wanted to take the pain away for both of them, the ones they will experience not just now but even later. I was also wonder if as the story progressed and we got older their would be more ways in which we would express ourselves I did notice the ways in which we react so far are limited. I was wondering if that was intentional due to us being still so young?.
The psychological aspects of the story really has me in a choke hold. I know you'll have me crying even more but I'm excited to see how this story pans out. I know their are so many ways that trauma can be portrayed and I looking forward to seeing how you present it. So please, do continue to keep up the good work and I can't wait to see the flavored text that will be added later ♥.