Hi !
This game has a lot of potential.
Although similar to My boyfriend in game, this demo has its own character. I have to say that I even prefer the Yours game graphics to My boyfriend. I may also have laughed a little when I saw Retep's first name (reversing the first and last letters? No really, I chuckled).
As for the English translation, you can use deeple which is much better than google trad.
In any case, I really like this beginning. I really want to see more!