Thank you!
As for the pain, the voice-acting made that so much more real. When it was all silent, it seemed quite ok, and I have to say, it surprised the heck out of me too!
Since I'm gonna re-do most of Chapter 1, I'm thinking of making the FMG look far less painful. I might actually make a Patreon poll at some point to decide that, just in case a lot of my followers are into painful FMG scenes (but I'm pretty much will agree that it needs to be changed).