First, the music is *insanely good*. Goddamn, I was jamming out a ton.
Second, if this was to get updated, I'd love to see an end where Yuni and Erz figure things out. There's just enough inferred through dialogue to see that Erz has not had much time, maybe a computer program that jacked an organic body, and developed a fear of death so profound he felt he needed to do what he did, yet holds himself back.
Yuni, for her part, seems to have enough emotional intelligence and empathy to see what's wrong.
I do love an enemies to lovers situation.
Goes without saying, this was *really good*.